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port commission - romantic by =thedeafpoet:iconthedeafpoet:

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©2009 =thedeafpoet
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i guess making ports is kinda like riding a bicycle after all. i thought i was going to have a really tough time getting back into it but i guess not. huzzah!

i guess this means i'm opening portrait commissions..



romantic © :iconelegantlybroken:
art © lauren nicole

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~The-Dark-Sicilian Apr 25, 2009, 4:14:31 PM
The pose on this is interesting. It shows a good portion of the character without being crammed or zoomed out too much. I adore the detail and shading on the wings and the line art over all is wonderful. The shading on the hair, however, leaves a bit to be desired in my opinion. I know hair is one of the hardest things to shade, but I just feel that it's not up to par with the rest of the shading. I also don't care much for the blush on the cheeks. I think it distracts from the face and looks a bit more like foot ball or baseball face paint.
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=a-e-v-a Apr 25, 2009, 12:47:52 AM
Might have to get a port from you at some point... Those wings are amazing, as is the hair.
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=thedeafpoet Apr 25, 2009, 12:57:41 AM
thank you! c:

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“Much violence is based on the illusion that life is a property to be defended and not to be shared.” -Henri Nouwen
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*jpak Apr 25, 2009, 6:38:35 AM
Wow, this came out really nice. The wings are incredibly detailed 8D

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He said, softly, "I will mangle your mind."
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=thedeafpoet Apr 25, 2009, 7:06:37 AM
thank you so much! 83

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“Much violence is based on the illusion that life is a property to be defended and not to be shared.” -Henri Nouwen
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=thedeafpoet Apr 25, 2009, 7:15:22 AM
i owe it to you, actually! if you wouldn't have told romantic to contact me i probably wouldn't have tried ports again for a while. thank you for sending her my way. <33

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“Much violence is based on the illusion that life is a property to be defended and not to be shared.” -Henri Nouwen
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~misssarahz Apr 25, 2009, 7:16:40 AM
Hahah. Really its no problem. I've always loved your ports!
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~tehxfactor Apr 25, 2009, 7:56:29 AM
I have to agree with Aeva, I may have to get a port from you ;)

But this is simply stunning, the hair and wings are to die for. I love the folds of the dress. :)

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Little Miss X Factor
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~wholion Apr 25, 2009, 8:38:05 AM
And your work's always been amazin'. :love:
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